Clarence Boddicker

I'm on my second snowday this week too...I guess that means we live sort of close?

Echoes

Personally, I would throw this away and start over. A prologue really isn't necessary for this; rather than coming right and saying "hey I have synesthesia," let it come out ...

Just a quick comment on one thing you pointed out, because I pretty much agree with everything else you said. As to Jim’s behavior – I can totally understand his ...

This isn't really in a very good chapter format, because the story was never intended to be divided into the chapters; I just needed a suitable place to stop so ...

About to crack into The Rum Diary. Any Thompson fans out there?

I guess I'm kind of old school when it comes music, but I have a hard time finding newer bands that I like. What I listen to depends on what ...

I'm not sure that anyone ever actually said this to me, because I live by this rule, but my favorite piece of advice for writing (and life in general) is ...

First things first; there really isn't any purpose to the description of Aurelix. Describing characters by having them study their reflections is kind of cheesy, and it's a bad way ...

I guess I missed that you're under a word limit here (I suppose "identity" is the theme you have to use?). I'll try to clarify some stuff. Regarding the smell ...

The first sentence is great, drawing the reader in and whatnot, but the second sentence fails. I'm not entirely sure what you meant say there, but simply replacing the "and" ...

I copied and pasted it from fictionpress and slapped a pre tag on it. But thanks for the helpful feedback.

There was an ominous feel to the night, a smell of danger and the lingering hint of unseen horrors lurking in the shadows. Wind howled through trees and brought showers ...

There were a number of times in this story that I had no idea what was happening. Right off the bat, the labs and Visitor Area left me wondering just ...

If the formatting is a little fucked up in places, it's because the pre tag was doing crazy things with the preview button, so I got rid of it and ...